Thank you for your submission. The graphic material you have provided is of excellent quality and I am easily able to see you ideas. There are some elements of the design that I really like and some elements less so. The dining table is the perfect shape to accomodate a large number of guests in the limited space available, however I don't really like the style. The bar area is quite nice in appearance but the added plumbing needed for the sink and large countertop surface with glass may make this cost prohibitive. The modification to full height walls to totally seperate the main living area from the bedrooms and back hallway, I believe, will make the whole loft appear smaller and less open.
Overall, while I really liked many of the elements in your design, I don't see enough of the industrial element mixed in with the design.